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Jan 4, 2008

Tirk muoy dom norkk - poEm

One of our greatest fears in life is that of losing someone we love. It does count from simple friends to real soulmates. This fear plagues us from our childhood and continues to do so all through adulthood. So, if you love someone, you say it, you say it right then, out loud, or the moment just passes by you. If it doesn't work out or even work out not that long as desired just let it be cus love may start as the strongest passion but when time passes and the storm of emotions calms down, relationships once so bright and full of surprises become routine. It drags on for a while and then comes crisis. A couple can either survive through it or fall apart. I am yet in no way illustrating myself via the following poem. Just in case for any of the readers who has lost a loved one or will expect to lose a loved one, this poem would in some ways matchs your heartache.
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Tirk muoy dom norkk

Tirk sarb muoy torkk
srorkk khnong samut
pi bark bom phot
neng bon sarb barn.
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phkar rus rouy heury
mdech leouy breor brarn
kro pum tiet barn
douch derm vinh te.

mjass snae khngum eury
oun neng barn ke
ter song-khim te
rir kor yang na.
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bang teorng song-khim
khnong pheap soa-kar
tha jamm ji va
tiang khmean song-khim.



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PS: pls refer to me with any of my Khmer-english words you do not understand via the below comment section.

2 commEnts:

Anonymous said...

is it a poem? what is the rationale for that poem? you better learn more on how to write a good poem before you decided to post it on your blog. it is a good try though it sounds quite clumsy. lol ;-P

outcastE said...

yeah it is a poem, defenitely a 4 rhymed words poem. It's rationally written for a personal account. Well i guess this is all my ability to have written this poem. Tho it was from instant thought, i am sure it is perfectly a 4 rhymed words poem. Prove me where's the clumsy stanza? By the way, thank for passing by. ;)